[webkit-reviews] review granted: [Bug 194510] Store Ad Click Attribution requests in the network process : [Attachment 361922] Patch

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Alex Christensen <achristensen at apple.com> has granted John Wilander
<wilander at apple.com>'s request for review:
Bug 194510: Store Ad Click Attribution requests in the network process
https://bugs.webkit.org/show_bug.cgi?id=194510

Attachment 361922: Patch

https://bugs.webkit.org/attachment.cgi?id=361922&action=review




--- Comment #21 from Alex Christensen <achristensen at apple.com> ---
Comment on attachment 361922
  --> https://bugs.webkit.org/attachment.cgi?id=361922
Patch

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r=me, lots of nits

> Source/WebCore/loader/AdClickAttribution.cpp:96
> +    builder.appendLiteral("Source: ");

We might find it useful in the future to have this in JSON format.  We can
always change it if needed, but just a thought.

> Source/WebCore/loader/AdClickAttribution.h:100
>	   String registrableDomain;
> +	   bool isDeleted { false };

String has a constructor that takes HashTableDeletedValueType, so we don't need
a separate bool for this.

> Source/WebCore/loader/AdClickAttribution.h:167
>	   String registrableDomain;
> +	   bool isDeleted { false };

ditto

> Source/WebKit/NetworkProcess/NetworkAdClickAttribution.cpp:67
> +	       builder.appendLiteral("WebCore::AdClickAttribution ");

NetworkAdClickAttribution?

> Source/WebKit/NetworkProcess/NetworkProcess.cpp:2301
> +    completionHandler(emptyString());

I'm not sure if it's important to use emptyString here or if a null string
would suffice.

> Source/WebKit/UIProcess/WebPageProxy.cpp:4106
> +	   if (auto adClickAttribution = navigation->adClickAttribution()) {

auto&
No need to copy the Optional.

> Tools/WebKitTestRunner/InjectedBundle/TestRunner.cpp:2731
> +    WKRetainPtr<WKStringRef> messageName(AdoptWK,
WKStringCreateWithUTF8CString("dumpAdClickAttribution"));

This is old style WKRetainPtr use.  Try this instead:
auto messageName = adoptWK(WKStringCreateWithUTF8CString(...));

> Tools/WebKitTestRunner/TestInvocation.h:148
> +    String m_savedAdClickAttribution;

This is never set.  We can remove it.